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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Life is cruel and life is kind Life won't make up ur mind It can be mean it can be nice Upon life you can't put a price Is it just me or the same for you? Is life cruel to you too? Nothing seems to go my way Is there a price i have to pay? In the end everything falls apart You get hurt or have a broken heart Will life ever be good to me? Is life ever a cup of tea? Your grades always tend to drop That's all they can do from the top Guys are mean and often cruel A heart can't be fixed with any tool Life goes on so they say Choose to have another day |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
 Since no one's replied yet I'm gonna go ahead and tell y'all that there are a lot of excellent poets on this site and I'd like to acknowledge that and to say thanks to those who have replied to my poems, thanks a bunch!Curlz |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Since no one's replied yet I'm gonna go ahead and tell y'all that there are a lot of excellent poets on this site and I'd like to acknowledge that and to say thanks to those who have replied to my poems, thanks a bunch!Curlz |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like this one...It was really creative...I liked this part best: A heart can't be fixed with any tool Good work!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Geez chica, don't you hate when you only get a few replies? lol yeah, I totally agree, we all know what life is..or can be *cough cough hint hint* keep it up girl....hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so cool, I like this poem! Keep up the great work  Life goes on so they say Choose to have another day |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So yea, your lines about how guys are cruel and stuff.....well in reply to that i say "HA!"........that HA simply states 2 things. - Your generalization is obviously wrong in the sense that not ALL guys can be categorized into that. - Women can also cause the same effect, and frankly, for me, it is the women who cause this simply because i am a MALE. But in no sense of fashion will i say that women in general are cruel. OK so there's my two cents of knowlegde. Great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey girl! Sorry it took me so long to get to it! Anyways, it was VERY interesting and you did well!! Your thoughts were well organized, not all guys are cruel, but a large population can be--or so it seems. Just keep your head up! Life will get better...I Promise!!Best of Luck! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
thanks for replyin guys! Dopey: i know that not all men are cruel, but i haven't had the best luck with guys so from my experience guys(the ones i've dated) are cruel, ireally appreciate my guy buds but as for dating, guys are horrible to me Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really good one. Different in style. Maybe you're looking in the wrong direction when it comes to guys. Don't worry, he'll come to your life and you'll change everything you think about guys I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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