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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-20 04:02 PM

God's Music:

The rain drips down
As I sit in a calm.
Thunder crashing,
Emotions clashing.
Much like God's tamborin.

I'm a living contradiction
Amongst idiotic individuals.
I hope to become the leader,
I hope to find my way
Around the walls of questions.

Hearing the everlasting melody.
Observing the highs and lows.
I'm but a black hole of knowledge.
I'm but a hallow tree in autumn.
Much like God's drum stick.

Here in the depths of society
Treading alongside scum and waste,
Sleeping in fear of the nothingness around.
It's all incoherent and bleak.
I wish to trascend to the next level.

I'm hiding behind the curtains of fear.
I try to escape from my very own mind,
Yet the grasp it has on me, and I on it,
Are indivisible and unbreakable.
Much like God's passion for classics.

So with this being all I know,
I sit in my motionless state
Wondering, wishing, and dreaming.
Much like God himself
Much like everybody else.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-09-20 04:12 PM

Hey there, how are you? I really liked your poem, just sorry you didn't like mine.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-20 11:09 PM

I never said i didnt like your poem. In fact i dont say that to anybody, so you probably misinterpreted something i said. But anyway thanks for liking this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-09-20 11:12 PM

I never said i didnt like your poem. In fact i dont say that to anybody, so you probably misinterpreted something i said. But anyway thanks for liking this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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