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Teen Poetry #3

Ode to R.F.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-20 03:57 PM

Ode to R.F. :

I saw her in the mist
Of the dew shined grass.
The trees swaying as in one.
The water rippling with life.
The sky lighting up with joy
As the stationary clouds
Form concrete shapes.

Running along nature
As nature moves through her.
The barrier of beings is crushed
And true peace takes into form.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-09-20 04:06 PM

Wow Javi...I closed my eyes and saw this girl in the midst of a wonderful world...so wonderful...don't we wish all life could be so peaceful...*sigh* beautiful work...

~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-21 12:27 PM

For some reason Dopey this doesnt seem finished...I mean it does but it doesnt...I dont know I think these drugs got to my head...LOL This was really good though...

P.S.~~~Dont take everything I said to the heart!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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