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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-09-19 09:06 PM


All I want is truth.
Break down these walls, and give me hope.
Don't abuse me, for I am sensitive.
Don't tease me, I am weak... and easily hurt.
Quit messing with the mind of the one you need.
Do not cut off the air of which you breathe.
Wait for me...

Be patient.


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1 posted 2000-09-19 09:12 PM



  Whoa do I know how ya feel... Very good.Me like.

  ~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

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2 posted 2000-09-19 09:15 PM


If there ever was a poem to descrive my every feeling, it is this one!! You have done a magnificent job here!! I truly enjoyed reading it...it got better the second and third times b/c I better understood it. Keep it up I love to read 'em!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~
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If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.  




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3 posted 2000-09-20 03:15 PM


I have a headache.....i liked this poem too. wait for meeee



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Erin
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4 posted 2000-09-20 06:20 PM


Jenn~~~You seem to be sending out a good message here...In alot of different ways...Good job!!!I think that the longer you wait for something or someone the better it is when you get it...

Keep up the good work!!!


*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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5 posted 2000-09-20 06:37 PM


WOW i really can relate to this poem! that doesn't happen too often but i felt like ur words were mine! good poem
Curlz

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6 posted 2000-09-21 03:58 AM


Patience is one hell of a vitue, when we have it...nice work there.

Jeremy

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.


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7 posted 2000-09-21 07:37 PM


Truth is the most important thing in a relationship, for you can't build trust without it. Don't rest until you recieve it. Very well-written piece. Best of luck!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence.

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