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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-19 05:03 PM


Every tear cried,
Is a lesson learned.
Every heart-break,
Is wisdom earned.
Love tends to cause,
Endless strife and pain.
But if you are strong,
Then you will only gain.
Accept that hurt,
That is dealt to you.
And soon your dark skies,
Will once again be blue.

As time goes on,
A heart does heal.
But the scars that remain,
You will always feel.
Keep your head held high,
Be proud and strong.
And soon you true love,
Will come along.
You’ll look back at loves past,
And laugh as you say,
“What was I thinking,
on all those days?”



© Copyright 2000 Sara - All Rights Reserved
Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
1 posted 2000-09-19 05:26 PM


you know i love this!  keep it up girl! luv ya!
~*Pixie*~

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-09-19 05:28 PM


I loved it!!! You are truly talented! And you're right...the pain does subside, it's like I always say.."Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade..." Keep it up I was impressed!
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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
3 posted 2000-09-19 08:08 PM


hey Sara! This is an awesome POEM!!! make sure you write one for me!!! HAHAHA   j/k
see ya 'round... buh bye

Love,
Val a.k.a ~*Space Cadet*~ lol


~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

Child of the Stars
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4 posted 2000-09-19 09:08 PM



  Way to look on the bright side. Sometimes we forget to do that! Great poem.

  ~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-09-20 03:13 PM


You know, i liked this poem. I feel its cool to view at it positively....but see..... its like this sugar...... i am going through this right now....and the pain will subside in about a year..... now i know i'll look back on and think "damn i was a wreck"...but not that i was foolish in thinkin the thigns i do. Crap i have a huge headache... i dont know what im saying.....all i know is that it all depends on what it is you are going or went through. but yea, liked the poem



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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