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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Handed Wisdom: Bless the lord be it so That I have no friend and no foe. With everything I learned, I stop to say That being alone is the only way. And I am wise and one who knows About all directions in which water flows. Be it by satin or the demons devine That I am in search in soul to find A man who coughs life essense in form, And needs no chance to be but warned About the dangers in this horrible place, So he live without guidance and without a chase. I live to see in what I do, All in due time I will come to you, And preach about philosophy and ways of time So you can do anything and call it mine. But for now my son, you are alone at home Soon to be set free and forever roam. I'll see you when the horizon shines, And where all trees are known as pines. See you then my innocent son, All your learning has just begun, All your sins will be known as relief, And until then you start your belief.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Whoa, that was tight…I like rhyming stuff…makes me feel tough…hehe… Anywho, good job, very cool and kinda creepy… In-wishing-there-were-less-randomly-exploding-objects THERE IS NO SPOON! Spreading insanity, one post at a time Singing, "If i die before i wake..." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Javier! From much deep thought, arises wisdom ... I enjoyed your sentiments in this, a very good read!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I am glad you liked this one. I was obsessed with the idea of WISDOM during this wave. This is when I started to fully enjoy and probe the inners of philosophy. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good job, Dopey. Interesting words... good ideas. Jenn |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Kick @$$ read here. I wasn't around when you joined us, but let me say that you're right where you should be, @ HOME among the warriors of literature---the cyber poets. Thomas A. Plemmons Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Traveller New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 6 |
WOW... As fools confound the wise... We are but fools on this lush plane of existenz. If the poets of yore could but see us now, casrrying on the legacy in a greater fashion than they ever dreamed. Dylan Thomas, eat your heart out! Traveller "Just as I've lived, almost unknown, A life unmarked, obscure and alone, So let me die;" -James Edward Wilson |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
cool  Chosen to live a joyful life, Blessed with a huge heart, Day to day I live the life, Live the life brought to me, So much unshared love yet to giv |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~This is the best...Well actually I like it best...Keep up the good work buddy...You seem to have a way with the words!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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