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Sitting At The Red Light
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Sitting At The Red Light |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sitting at the red light she’s giving me the green light My engines running and I’m ready to go Better shift my gear stick…liquid engineering Got a fuel injection and she’s ready to blow All day long she’s been slip streaming me I’ll get her in the fast lane …….. ……………..Will she race let’s see The road is overcrowded must be some attraction We’re in a tight spot and the pace is slow She’s got some flashy headlights now she’s indicating Pull her in a lay bye……..see her engine glow Looking pretty steamy perhaps she’s blown a fuse Better lift her hood up………… ………………See she can’t refuse I’m racing every highway discover every bye way She’s glued to the road and hugging every curve Never in a shy way I like to travel my way She wants to go faster have I got the nerve Slow her down right here before her hubcaps fly I’d better take her home…………… ………………….Before I say goodbye Don’t you think that life is a…….. race And true love too that can be…. a chase If you want to get some action To be the main attraction You’re in a 2.2 but it could be 4x4 Fill her up with gas And stomp it to the floor Jon |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jon~~~Good one!!! Don’t you think that life is a…….. race And true love too that can be…. a chase I dont believe that life is a race...At times it is...But not always...And finding true love now that is a big chase... Good choice of words for that part...I hope to see more work by you!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i thought this poem could be made into a really great song. I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
thanx Erin and Dopey.......yeah I never thought of that........it's got rythem. thanx Dopey  Jon |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Great poem Jon...I agree with Dopey...this poem could be turned into a song. Very creative aswell might I add. In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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