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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
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0 posted 2000-09-19 07:57 AM



Endless night of silent whispers

This endless night of silent whispers
The blackened sky encloses further
Hypnotizing me
Dancing stars above the horizon
Dancing through this endless night

This endless night of silent whispers
The innocence that speaks for itself
Hypnotizing me
No sound to hear
No sound, but silent whispers

This endless night of silent whispers
This silent world taht knows no harm
Hypnotizing me
A world of peace
Destroyed when daylight comes

This endless night of silent whispers
This night, not everlasting
Hypnotizing me
Will be gone when daylight comes
Daylight, joined with noise

This endless night of silent whispers
Will soon be destroyed
Awaking me
The sounds, the rumours, the words
Soon, all will be, destroying me

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-19 09:24 AM


VS~~~Girl you have so much talent...I cant even write a poem...I have the worst case of writer's block...Keep it up!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

TAP2
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
2 posted 2000-09-19 11:41 AM


WOW...

First of yours I've had a chance to read. Impressive...dark in expression and in thought, bringing to mind the joy of the night, the warmth and security it offers to those souls wishing not to be seen. But yet an underlying train of thought maybe leading from a dream world where whispers are hidden, not quite heard, to a daylight awakening to a world filled with lies and gossip that are weighing upon a weary soul.
Very well done.

Thomas A. Plemmons

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
3 posted 2000-09-19 04:18 PM


VS: hey wassup? how's life? *anyways* i like this much! you rock! i've spent way to many hours with a shrink (all day almost) so i'm feeling a tad better than this morning. the school told me my friend jesica had died this morning, but it was a lie. there's still hope! well, bye! love ya much, allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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