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Angels innocence
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Angels innocence |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Dedicated to my girl! In a glance I can see you are ment to be. I look twice and realize I truly see. Your are a angels innocence. A symbol of love. Your are like a rose beautiful and unique, like a rose needs water to live, all you need is love to succeed. She lives in my heart every day. She was the one that showed me, how to keep the pain away. She is all that is good and deeply caring an Angel that is truly love bearing. Your are my Angels innocence. [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sounds like you are in love!!!Awww how sweet...That is the best feeling in the world... Your are like a rose beautiful and unique, like a rose needs water to live, all you need is love to succeed. Good imagination...A rose that blossoms into something so beautiful...Just like love...All we need is the feeling that someone is loving us to succeed... Great job...I hope to see more of your work!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the title, i liked the poem. I thought it was cute and sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow this was so heart-felt! Did you show this to "your girl"? Cuz I bet she'd really love it! Thank you for sharing this with us....it was really sweet!  Awesome job! Much love Kris ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Aww that's so sweet!! Nice catchy title too  . Definetely show this to your girl. Keep it up hasta luegoBel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Ewww, girls have cooties… Hehe, cool poem…but watch out for that rose simile. Indeed a rose is sweet and unique, but sooner or later…anywho wish ya luck… In-wishing-love-was-an-incurable-condition THERE IS NO SPOON! Spreading insanity, one post at a time Singing, "If i die before i wake..." |
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