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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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So many words such little said we babble on thoughts in my head of what it means but now it's past can't stop to think it goes to fast lost conversations not meant to last now in my mind the doubts are cast the words move on not much more ahead can't even think of what was said I wrote this about a month ago after a conversation I had with someone on instant messanger. It just seemed like an incredible waste of time. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL Lakewalker!!!Sometimes I cant even remember a conversation I had with someone yesterday...Good job displaying how you felt... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
hehe..great poem..I know what you mean..I've just had a converstation..(I've recently escaped) on msn, between 2 ppl exchanging contacts...that's IT..*snore* Nice one...  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Haha...many times I have had meaningless convos. Way to portray this in a wonderful poem! Me like. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem, me liked. Good job, me liked.  |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow I really liked this poem, it was so original and well-worded...I agree with you 100%...if you're not going to talk about something useful, what's the point? AWESOME job. Loved it lotz! Much love Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Until I got to your explanation, I thought this was talking about the meaningless drivel you have to go through to woo a love and then end up losing her anyway--Interesting angle in IM- they can be such a bore! Dean |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you all for your replies, I greatly appreciate them all  Euclid the Kid- I'd never looked at it like that, thanks for pointing it out, I love hearing how others view my poems  |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I feel your pain.  I so feel your pain.  Great job. *sniffle* ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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