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UNC STAR
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0 posted 2000-09-17 11:47 PM


And at last it is clear to me
you told me things that it shouln't be
like how to write poems so sweet and now it's
time to turn up the heat of my writing the cold stuff must go away and the burning passion of poems see another day, for writing it not what i do it is what I am. Feeling , emotions, and desires that flow out ink onto paper that screams as it feel my
and laughs as it feels the joy that I bring so just remember when you read this that writing poetry is just like whatever you want it to be.
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What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

[This message has been edited by UNC STAR (edited 09-17-2000).]

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-17 11:52 PM


UNC~~~This is good...But I dont find all poetry like giving a kiss...Cause there are some poems that I have that are full of pain...And I dont think that is like giving or receiving a kiss...Its just a bunch of painful emotions that I need to get out of me...

Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece dont fit

Deranger
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2 posted 2000-09-18 01:54 AM


May I first inquire into the origins of your name?  It’s rather unique…

Anywho, yes ok, I’m guilty, the glove fits…no wait…wrong confession…eheh…I mean I’m guilty, I liked it…
Good job…

In-wishing-the-justice-system-were-less-patchy

THERE IS NO SPOON!



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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-09-18 12:36 PM


Ok, you were right, I liked this   It's great!
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4 posted 2000-09-18 03:55 PM


love the poem UNCstar!!! Shine!!

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
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5 posted 2000-09-18 05:22 PM


Yes, I did like...you're talented! Do you go to UNC? just curious...
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   If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.  



[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-18-2000).]

Kandi
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6 posted 2000-09-18 10:26 PM


Yup I liked it a lot...very original

"for writing it not what i do it is what I am. "

Aahh, love that line. Brilliant  

Much Love
Kris



~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~

Lovely_Kris
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7 posted 2000-09-19 08:29 PM


I think you did a great job on this poem and I hope to read more. I wish I had more to say.well keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

UNC STAR
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8 posted 2000-09-19 10:14 PM


Thanks for the replies. I really enjoy all of the responses.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

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