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UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

0 posted 2000-09-17 11:22 PM

How can you say I never loved you
The way I caressed and held you
The way I consoled you through your hard times
The way I made your face shine when you felt like
crying and the way I saved you when you felt like dying or maybe it is not the fact that I never loved maybe you never loved me.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-09-17 11:33 PM

Coming to grips with reality is never easy…in fact, I chose not too! But my lack of sanity aside, nice work…lots of emotion…yummy… Well, believe it or not, I know what you’ve been through…if you’d prefer to talk about it, my addy is in my profile….

In-wishing-love-made-more-sense

THERE IS NO SPOON!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Singing, "If i die before i wake..."

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-17 11:39 PM

UNC~~~What a choice of words...This was good...Very thought provoking...I enjoyed it though...Keep up the good work...< !signature-->

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-17-2000).]

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-18 12:43 PM

I really liked your ending to this, it's definitly a thought you have to wonder about:

"maybe it is not the fact that I never loved maybe you never loved me."

And great poem

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

4 posted 2000-09-18 01:06 PM

Be pactiante I know it is not easy when life takes curves instead of going straight like we all want it to I have lived a life without loveing someone until recently it was when I was 19 I had my very first girlfriend and now two years later I still love her even though we are not togther any more you cannot rush love and if you try you are left in the dust crying

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

5 posted 2000-09-19 11:34 AM

First of yours I've read... and I liked it. Very expressive yet simple depiction of God's love toward us. Reminds me a little of the end of 'Footprints in the Sand'.

Thomas A. Plemmons

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

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