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memories of a friend |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
faded pictures of you and me the promise of tommrow held captive in the light of our smiles together we always were to calm each others tears chasing the monster out from under the bed holding hands and sharing secrets the months turned to years we grew older bolder wiser to the world "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This sounds like a somewhat sad poem to me...As if you are no longer friends with this person...But who knows I may be wrong...Good job though!!!  ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yep, friends are good…Thank god we have them… Good job  In-wishing-the-world-was-a-friendlier-place, THERE IS NO SPOON! Spreading insanity, one post at a time Singing, "If i die before i wake..." |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"faded pictures of you and me the promise of tomorrow held captive in the light of our smiles" This is lovely SorrowfulAngel! The lines above are melodic and inspiring ... beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, now this is good! Thanks for sharing it with us |
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