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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-09-17 07:42 PM


16.09.00

Dearest Angel,
I thank you with the utmost gratitude
And without your guiding light
I would be lost in this crazy world
My soul would surely grow hungry and cold
But your love and guidance
Warms the very depths of my true being
I just wish that there was something I could do
To let you know how much I truly love and cherish you
Perhaps the sweetest kiss
And my warmest smile
Would let you know
Of how much you mean to me
And that with you by my side
I will no longer have to face the cold alone
And once you wrap your angel wings
Around me each and every night
I thank god for finally sending me back home


"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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1 posted 2000-09-17 10:47 PM


Wow this is so beautiful...I like it very much...Keep up the good work...I cant wait to see more of it!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-09-18 06:47 AM


This was a cute poem. I could envision this angel doing wrapping the wings around me. Awwww such a cute image. hehe i liked the poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


TAP2
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
3 posted 2000-09-19 11:50 AM


Feelings were expressed beautifully in this poem. I found it very comforting. I hope your angel realizes what he has.

Thomas

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

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