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anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

0 posted 2000-09-17 02:19 PM


the head is what is beaten,
in this classic time of hate.
You hide your contempt well,
marching down the street.

You fabricate the truth,
and pump it full of lies.
I am the result of you,
and i am dead inside.

The love you get is not what you give,
and your head is of a serpent and your mind is of a rat.
I carry my age old weapon,
i'm the one who assinated time.

Nothing came from above,
nor anything is below.
Live your lives spent in a pen,
no one would care for your god is already dead.

"'I am the the lizard king
I can do anything
I can make the earth stop in its tracks
I made the blue cars go away

© Copyright 2000 Alexei - All Rights Reserved
Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-09-17 03:06 PM


Kinda has a twisted gothic type aftertaste…yummy.

Good work…again…
Just remember,


THERE IS NO SPOON!


Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Singing, "If i die before i wake..."


Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-09-18 06:41 AM


Sorry i didnt reply sooner but last night the server would NOT let me on. I sometimes despise this server. Anyway, i liked the poem. Had a lot of tune to it. Good flow.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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