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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA

0 posted 2000-09-16 03:10 PM


Letting Go

My love was so pure
My heart was so true
I wanted you always
No matter what you were to do
But these feelings I can't take
I don't want them anymore
You don't feel the way I do
Of this I am sure
I don't want the butterflies in my stomach
I don't want my heart to sink
Next time I fall for someone like you
Beforehand I will think.
I'm tired of holding on
To what just isn't there
I'm tired of foolishly waiting
For the day when you will care
I'm tired of all this pain
I endlessly feel inside
I'm tired of these feelings
I always have to hide
So now I'm giving up
I'm moving on, I'm letting go
Inside I'm crying
But outside I won't let it show
And even when you're gone
And we're thousands of miles apart
I just want you to know
You'll always have a special place in my heart


~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~



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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2000-09-16 03:41 PM


This is a very touching poem sweetstuff, one of the hardest things to do in this life, is letting go of something you really loved.

Best of luck

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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
2 posted 2000-09-16 03:42 PM


This is so good.  When my boyfriend broke up with me I felt my heart drop.  I loved him so much and I know exactly what you're going through.  Guys...they just don't understand unless it happens to them.  I found one guy though that promised he would never treat me that way and he has.  We are going out and it is our second time.  As much as he has hurt me I still love him and he says he still loves me.  I think you should just go for what your heart wants.  And even if the relationship doesn't work out, it is still good to be friends....good luck.
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-17 02:18 AM


I don't want the butterflies in my stomach
I don't want my heart to sink
Next time I fall for someone like you
Beforehand I will think.

You tell those guys what you want and dont want...Good way to pour out your feelings...

I just want you to know
You'll always have a special place in my heart

Such a choice of words...I dont know if I could honestly care for a guy if he hurt me afterwards...I dont know though...Most likely I would...But its just a thought...

Good work...I cant wait to see more...

Sorry about going on and on...


~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-09-17 08:17 AM


ok, this reminds me of myself a while ago... hehe, been there, done that... but I had to choose also... between my heart and my mind... and I listened to my heart... Guess it's always best to listen to your heart...
good luck with it and luvz ya!

VS


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

FitchGirl1896
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since 2000-09-15
Posts 9

5 posted 2000-09-17 11:32 AM


This is EXACTLY how I feel! Long story,but lets just say he doesnt love me like  he used to ! Well anways good work!
          ~*FitchGirl*~

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
6 posted 2000-09-17 12:53 PM


Oooh I liked this
and I could RELATE to it so bad... it brought tears to my eyes. Good job, keep it up!  

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