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Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-09-16 02:32 PM


I just guess
it'll always be
the two of us
Living in dreams

Not together
but thinking
we belong
With eachother

We know we do
But we can't
always be
Aside

We need eachother
from time to time
when the going
Get's tough...

Love
Support
Care
Strength

We'll give it
to eachother
Whenever we need
someone


© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
1 posted 2000-09-16 03:02 PM


that was great, i really liked it! keep up the great work!

Luv,
  *!*sweetstuff*!*

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~



anomaly187
Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US
2 posted 2000-09-16 03:34 PM


great poem...it's nice to have someone to help you through the tough times

"'I am the the lizard king
I can do anything
I can make the earth stop in its tracks
I made the blue cars go away

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-17 01:29 AM


Is Virgin happy???Oh girl you sound so happy which makes me happy!!!Its a beautiful poem too!!!Keep it up my friend...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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