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My Heart
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My Heart |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
So many promises that you have soaked into my brain Now have left me with nothing but pain Don't you even care? You don't understand the pain that I have to bare Pain of heartbreak Next time, my heart, I won't let you take It's wrong to take a person's heart And just tear it all apart I should have taken more care Instead I let my heart hang by a hair I was too blind to see Just what it was you were doing to me Wish you knew how I felt And all the pain that I've been dealt Just please try to understand And instead of my heart, take my hand. *Dedicated to the one I love the most...Mark* ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ey, keep your head up girl! I've been there too, but I pulled myself through, with a lot of help from my friends... but keep it up!! luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! I hope you are feeling better soon, I know how much this can hurt. Well great poem, keep writing. Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is beautiful *wipes a tear from her eye* GREAT work! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~~~Good one!!!Wow such emotions...One day (hopefully soon) your heart is gonna heal... Pain of heartbreak Next time, my heart, I won't let you take It's wrong to take a person's heart And just tear it all apart Good choice of words...Keep it up... ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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