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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Lightning flashes *shiver* Rain falls *shiver* Wind blows *shiver* The sound of thunder of falling rain The flickering lights the same again Fire Burn Endless Night Silent Terror< !signature--> I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this was a great little poem you wrote...the style you wrote this in is just really really amazing....love to see some more like this...and BEWARE OF THE SILENT TERROR!!!heh "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good work here. I could almost feel the storm. I like! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very unique! I too could almost feel the storm....exellent work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
VS~~~Amazing work my friend!!!It was as if you could actually picture the storm...Wonderful!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thank you all! yeah, this was written when I couldn't sleep because of a storm...  luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Written in the power of the moment, you've captured this beautifully ... powerful in yet so few words. Really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
A captured moment in time described with such distraught very good I liked it |
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