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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
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Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

0 posted 2000-09-16 12:46 PM


I'm leaving to another school soon
Please don't be sad you'll still be in my heart
You were my first boyfriend and my first love

If someone ask's me out
And I say yes your always going to be my friend
You showed me the light to go right way

At first I didn't think it'd work out
I was so shy, you weren't shy
I loved you but didn't know how to show it

When ever I'm sad you are always there
And I promise to make this better
I'll be always there for you

No matter if I'm away from you
I'll always be willing to talk to you
Because I love you

I always wonderd what's love like
You gave that chance to fall in love
I gave you that chance too

I hope you never forget me
I'll never forget you....



When YOU leave someone in love, friendship, death ect.. You leave footsteeps in their hearts

© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-09-16 08:27 PM



In an effort not to scare new members away; I’ll try to be normal….and lay off the altoids for the duration of this reply…

First (or would that be second?) off, welcome to passions.  I guess I am the first one to do that (haha, suckers!) .  Secondly, good work, I’m sure you’ll fit in nicely here.

THERE IS NO SPOON!


Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Singing, "If i die before i wake..."


LoveBug
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Posts 4697

2 posted 2000-09-16 11:14 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!
It's always hard to leave a person you love, but sometimes you just have to move on... but you should never forget the love that you shared. You describe it well. Keep up the good work!!!

PS-check your e-mail!

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-09-17 12:34 PM


Indeed welcome!  It is truly hard to leave someone you care about.  Well done, keep up the good work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-17 12:50 PM


Welcome to passions!!! Good poem here...Sounds like you are letting go before you fall hard...Being in love (i just realized sucks somewhat)...Cuz its not like you are gonna be with that one person for life...Well I wish you the best...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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