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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2000-09-16 03:17 AM


I'm sick of being hurt,
I'm sick of being burnt.
I'm sick of always crying,
I'm sick of my heart slowly dying.

I'm sick of caring,
I'm sick of bearing.
I'm sick of holding back,
I'm sick of slowly falling through a crack.

I'm just so frustrated and I wish I didnt hurt,
cause the pain's more then I can take.
If "he" is out there,
come find me for my heart's sake.



"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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Virgin Suïcide
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1 posted 2000-09-16 04:49 AM


aw....sorry to hear this! but I guess there really is someonoe out there for you!

luvz, VS

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2000-09-16 01:40 PM


Hey VirginSuicide...yeah love sucks sometimes...actually alot of the time. and i keep getting hurt and its making me so mad...but thanks for the reply  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Erin
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3 posted 2000-09-17 12:33 PM


DQ~~~Its good to see you back!!I am sorry about all this...Sounds like someone really close to you played you for a fool...Happens to everyone...Dont feel bad...I know it did to me...I feel in love with my ex~best (guy) friend only to find out he wanted my best (girl) friend...Talk about the worst of luck...Dont give up though girl...One day a prince charming is gonna come and scoop you up...Look forward to that day, not the days that make you feel like this...Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

DancinQueen
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4 posted 2000-09-17 12:47 PM


Hey ERIN!! Long time no talk. You always give me the best advice. Thank you so much, and I know i haven't posted forever..ive been so busy with school and dance and problems like this one. I always say im just gonna quit finding "the one" then i find someone new and then i get hurt. Its like a system...but oh well! thats life, nice to hear from you again! bye babe

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Suga_Baby
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5 posted 2000-09-17 04:38 PM


Wow... I couldn't have said it better myself... that is EXACLTY how i Have felt for SO long now! Wow... GREAT job... Wonderful... Stupendous... Amazing!
DancinQueen
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6 posted 2000-09-17 09:52 PM


Suga_Baby~~> Thanks so much for all those adjectives   Love sucks sometimes...but it can only go uphill, atleast im praying! hehe

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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7 posted 2000-09-18 03:31 PM


DQ: Love sucks. Hopefully not to bad for you. Life sucks. Boys suck. Scary people suck. Murder sucks. Crying sucks. When there's nothing you can do, that sucks to. Well, enough of my confusing and even more so today, life.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

DancinQueen
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8 posted 2000-09-18 11:43 PM


Hey!! thanks so much for replying, yeah all bad things in life do suck, but you know the saying..when life serves you a lemon, make lemonade  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Acies
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9 posted 2000-09-18 11:49 PM


another great write, but it makes me sad to see you hurt.  one of life's unfairness i guess.  please keep writing

ps. he'll find you

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

DancinQueen
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10 posted 2000-09-19 04:47 PM


acire what am i gonna do with you! its ok that it took you awhile...thats soo sweet of you to bump them all like this. thanks so much!luv ya  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

StarPryncess17
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11 posted 2000-09-19 05:33 PM


ha! I know this feeling all too well!! Keep your chin up girl I know he'll come...remember: "Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade..." Just keep that in mind, it helps! Nice to see ya back hun!!
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   If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.  





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Isabel Galaxia
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12 posted 2000-09-19 06:58 PM


Okay, yeah, I can say I know how you feel, I'm not sure I've been in your exact situation...all I can tell you is patience is a really really good thing to have.  Sounds stupid, but it's true.  And pleeease don't let guys get you down!!  Okay?  Keep writing and smiling
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

DancinQueen
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13 posted 2000-09-19 08:06 PM


StarP~~>Hey!   thanks for the quote..might just have to print that out
Bel~~>Hi ..thanks for the kind words, im trying to not let guys bring me down, and i always smile even if im in the worst mood    

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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