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Teen Poetry #3

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FlipAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-09-15 10:22 PM

The way I feel so weak
whenever you are near
the way you softly speak
is sweet music to thy ears

The way you always smile
so innocent, yet so true
they way you look into my eyes
if only, if only...you knew

So deeply do you touch thy heart
in ways you'll never know
so deeply kept is thy secret
to you, it will never show

The way I wish you felt the same
shared this feeling, too
I will never love another
if only, if only...you knew.

~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~

FitchGirl1896
New Member

since 2000-09-15

Posts 9

1 posted 2000-09-15 11:33 PM

Wow!!! That's SO sOoOOoOooOoO pretty!!! Do you midn if I copy it!?? I will definetly mention your name but I want to put it on my website that is SO how I feel about soemone! Good work!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-16 02:51 AM

I liked this poem a lot. Seems to me like you like the word THY. Anyway....good job

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

FlipAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA

3 posted 2000-09-16 05:19 PM

FitchGirl....yeah, sure, go ahead and put it on your website! I'd be flattered. Could u email me the link to your site? My email is Luvs2Flip428@aol.com

~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-09-16 05:26 PM

Hey!! I really, really liked this!! Keep up the lovely work.

~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

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