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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-09-15 06:38 PM


My life has been different without you
Where are you?
My life has been empty without you
I have been through everything
Thick and thin so,
Where are you?
I have been through almost everything but,
Where are you?
Maybe someday my dream will come true and I will find
Where you are
My mother



"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

1 posted 2000-09-15 09:28 PM


That was really good chel and I really enjoyed it. I hope your dream comes true and keep up the great work. I hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-09-16 02:46 AM


This was so sad.....bummed me out big time.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-09-16 05:17 PM


Lovely_Kris, thanx, I really enjoyed writing this, and thanx for the support.

Dopey_Dope, sorry this was such a diappointment.

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-17 12:39 PM


Chel~~~This is one of the best poems that I have ever read...Sounds like you poured out your whole heart and soul...I wish you the best (if you ever try) to find her...

Its good to see you back!!!Keep up the good work!!!


~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

X_me_X
Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37

5 posted 2000-09-17 12:51 PM


yeah i can relate
i really liked it
good job

~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
6 posted 2000-09-17 02:07 PM


Erin, thanx for the support.  I just typed this poem from the top of my head, odd isn't it?  I liked it and I hope that someday I will look for her.  By the way its great to be back.

X_me_X, I am glad that you liked it and I hope to read something from you.

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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