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old!! poem i found!! |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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HAPPY He told me last night that he loved me still And cared so much But he dumped me Even though my love for him is still there I have moved on And I am happy Even though a day doesn’t slip by without the thought of him entering my head I know that inside I really don’t need him like I used to think I did He was always great to me And gave me everything I ever wanted But I have moved on And I am happy Sometimes I think what if we were to be together again But then I wouldn’t get the chance The chance to have my new guy To experience others even if they aren’t as special as he was But I have moved on And I am happy I still care about him And I still want to be with him But I don’t need to be with him Although I have moved on And I am happy A part of me will always love him for he was my 1st love. * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hey! i'm going to be the 1st to reply to this. I just thought i'd give you a bit of insight into this poem.... I wrote this a few weeks after i started going out with the guy i am still with now, who i love soooo much! anyways, my x boyfriend was a gr8 guy, and i thought i loved him. but only recently i figured that what i felt for him was nothing like what i am feeling for my boyfriend now. so when i found this poem, i thought it was funny just how much a new experience can change a perspective just so much. because now i feel nothing for this 'x' and i know that he truly wasn't my 1st true love. and i realise that he actually wasn't that special after all. thanks ppl! luv ya Jo! xoxoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is good, I like it  It seems to explain how things go, you know afterwards that what you were feeling was a want, not a need. Anyway, great job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem....im going through this right now and i hope i get through it and come out with your positive attitude, however i find it very unlikely. Anyway kick butt!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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