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Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-14 06:40 PM

Someone always gets hurt,
no one knows why.
I just want to laugh,
but all i can do is cry.

It was so much easier,
at the start.
Then so difficult,
when it comes time to part.

I really wish,
it didn't have to be this way.
But it won't get better,
I just can't stay.

I am sorry if i broke your heart,
that is not what i wanted to do.
It is so hard to tell you,
I just can't be with you.

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-09-14 08:15 PM

Pixie,
Great poem, I have felt the hard end of that and I know a friend of who also went through that great poem!

There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path....

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

2 posted 2000-09-14 08:40 PM

that was beautiful, but it was soooo sad. I wrote a poem kinda like that once. Well great poem, keep writing!

Luv,
Sweetstuff

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-15 12:43 PM

Wow you just came staight out and said how you felt...It was beautiful!!!(Even if it was about breaking someones heart)...You should tell the person before things get out of control...Well good job...2 thumbs up for you...Keep it up!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-16 02:16 AM

This poem was sad. Made me sad at the end. Besides my sadness being sucky....i think the poem was good. Keep it up

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

5 posted 2000-09-16 12:40 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful replies! i am glad you liked this!!! thnaks again!!!!
~*Pixie*~

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2000-09-16 01:48 PM

Hey Girlie, this is your sis!! Love the poem, just wonderin where you got your inspiration.... hahaha just kidding chick

Well gimme a ring ring lata we'll do some brainstorming together so i can have some good stuff to write about. SEE YA ROUND

Love ya,

Verl

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