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Tibbsy
New Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 1

0 posted 2000-09-14 05:26 PM

Every night while I lie
I think of you and with a sigh
I wish that you knew how I feel
and mabe we could make it real
even thou we are a far
love can bridge a gap much farther then we
and I hope that you will see
through this poem i like thee
but I'm shy
and with each rise and fall of the sky
I wonder what your feelings are.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-14 07:23 PM

Welcome to Passions Tibbsy!

We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family!

This was a tender and lovely first post. I hope all will work out for you!

I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

HaVoK
Junior Member

since 2000-09-06

Posts 31
DETROIT, MI

2 posted 2000-09-14 07:27 PM

Nice poem... I like it a lot... But remember...
You only live once... So why waste time being Shy??

_.~'"'~._HaVoK_.~'"'~._
It's better to burn-out
Than fade away.......

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

3 posted 2000-09-14 08:20 PM

hey great poem!
I know how that feels all too well.
Well just want to tell ya I liked your peom, and keep writing!!!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-09-14 10:46 PM

Welcome to Passions

I liked this poem and I'll be looking for more by you

I hope you come to enjoy this community!

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

5 posted 2000-09-14 11:09 PM

Hey hun welcome to the family

I think you're gonna fit in nicely here! This poem was really good! You've got so much talent, I love the wording too! Thanks for sharing it with us!
Keep up the awesome job! I can't wait to here more from you!
~Kris~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-09-15 12:12 PM

Welcome To Passions

I hope you enjoy it here...Good poem...Couldnt really tell from it that you were shy...Anyways hope to see more by you!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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