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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-09-14 02:49 AM


I haven't been writing much lately...and I won't be writing all that much...but here's something I  feel I can do tonight.

Where There's a Friend, There's a Way

Has the brand new pavement under you
ever turned to gravel,
or suddendly freeze over and laugh
as you wreck upon your travel?
Was there someone there to capture you
from crashing to the ground?
Did fate bestow a friend to you,
when nothing else was found?
If never was a heart around
to love the pain away,
I tell you now, remember this...
where there's a friend, there's a way.

Jeremy D. Halstead  9-14-00


© Copyright 2000 Jeremy D. Halstead - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-09-14 07:43 AM


Jeremy- Why won't you be writing???   This is an awesome poem, well written and a nice tribute to friends.  Great job here.  Please keep writing so we can read your great poems   !

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 09-14-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-14 09:06 AM


Jeremy~~~This is just perfect!!!2 thumbs up for you...Where have you been lately???I havent seen you on...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
3 posted 2000-09-14 11:04 AM


Thanks for writing that Jer.  I really needed to read a poem like that today?

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-09-14 06:25 PM


This was wonderful Jeremy! So positive and uplifting ... I too, thank you for this smile tonight! Keep up the great writing Jer!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
5 posted 2000-09-14 06:46 PM


So, long time no talk!   I've been away for awhile b/c I've been so busy and I'd forgotten why I love this forum so much. But after reading this, suddenly I remember.  
I absolutely adore thise poem J. It's so sweet and sincere. You never disappoint us, that's for sure!
I'm SOOOO sad that you won't be posting much!   What's up with that??? Well, I'll definitely check from time to time to see if you've put anything up cuz I lvoe your writing so much!
Til next time, MUAH! Take care!  
Love and Hugs,
~K~


~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

Vball Chickie1624
Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
6 posted 2000-09-15 05:40 PM


hey babe...great poem!! i really like it! and yea like they said above why won't you be writing??  well gotta get going! talk to you later!

love ya
danielle

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