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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-09-13 06:18 PM


Night of Classics:


This is the way it ends.
While hearing the hungarian quartet
People clap

BRAVO!

Now my emotions bear down
As Afro Cubana swings over
The shadow of lifes eternal calender.

Her voice perplexes my
Thorax into constant spinning.
The bitter tasting morsel reminds me
Of a glowing light escaping from a nook
In the wall of my dead friend's house.

BRAVO!

The song kills the inside of my mind.
Strange how the sound of the Beatles
Can inspire more than O Fortuna!
I guess it's the once was that is more
Important than the now.

Youth was forgotten but
Brought back by a simple song.

BRAVO!





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Anorexorcist
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1 posted 2000-09-13 06:38 PM


hey dope another great poem...it flows beautifully and you use great words..keep it up oh poet master..heh
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2 posted 2000-09-13 08:54 PM


"Youth was forgotten but
Brought back by a simple song."

So true, my friend. It's amazing what music can do to a person. I really enjoyed this, along with all of your work. I look forward to reading your "batches", although I regret that I lack the time to reply to them a lot. I'm looking forward to tomorrow!  

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3 posted 2000-09-13 09:26 PM



  Dopes, I got one word for ya.
BRAVO!!! There's no other way to put it! Catcha l8er Javi..

  ~carly


Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

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