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Mommy Why?? (Please Read)
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Mommy Why?? (Please Read) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You say you're to tired, to listen to me today. You say you get so mad sometimes, and make me go away. But Mommy why do you, have those scratches on your arm? And why do you defend me, and put yourself in harm? You say Daddy had to, go away for a while. Aunt Cici says that, he's waiting for a trial. But Mommy why do you, cry at night? You say you miss daddy, but he filled you with fright. You say he'd come back, if he could. And you can't get away, though you know you should. But mommy if he hurts you, then why don't we leave? And how do you know, that he won't hurt me? Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ohw....this hurts So much to read this... I just hope that things are going a bit better at the mo...*crossing my fingers...* Plz get through this, ok? luvz ya!! *keep it up, for you and your mommy!* luvz, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
That's REALLY good... And it's good that you can share that... I hope you're ok... It sounds pretty bad We're all here for ya... And it might not have happened to me... But it happened to one of my sisters... and her kid... So I sorta know... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~~~I give you props for writing this... But mommy if he hurts you, then why don't we leave? And how do you know, that he won't hurt me? Are you talking about abuse???I feel what you are going through if you are...I have been there before with my mom and dad...And you said in the last line about him hurting you...My mom assumed that since he hit her when he would get drunk he would hit us...Never has my dad laid a finger on one of us... Well keep up the good work...If you ever want to talk my e~mail is posted above!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
I must say one of my favorites that i have read. Keep up the great work. I look forward to more from you. *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey all! Thanks for replying. Umm well, this isn't about me this time, it's about some ppl I know not very well, and all that. My family is just peachy, all we ever do is yell, and I read something like this and decided to try and write one of my own. (I mean, what else is there to do during Sceince class?) So don't get to concerend. They ppl are over it now. They you used to have an "attitude adjuster" but it's gone, well, bye. Allysa (YOu probably think I'm psycho, right??) Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I liked, It is sad, but I liked. I have a poem called "A lesson unlearned" that is similar...If you'd like to read it, I suggest you do so, it is one of my better ones (at least I think so)You might have to hunt it down though...Keep it up, I can't wait to read more. Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ :) If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. :) |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Hey, i enjoyed your poem, and i am glad to hear that the family did get help. i hope to see much more of your work  Check out mine if you get a chance... i have a few but i can only post one or 2 a day so... Good Luck in the future!! |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
hi! very well written poem. if this happened to you i'm so sorry that you had to get through it, but i'm glad you made it all right! keep writing and have fun! love ya Danielle "If I just simply loved you then I would know what to do, but then you had to go and lie to me. So, now I love you and I hate you, so my plans are all |
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