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Lakewalker
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0 posted 2000-09-13 01:55 PM


Shutting doors that never close
I've come to find in me,
a word of wisdom shared with none,
an answer only I can see

So having thoughts while no one knows
I've found my inner peace,
in this winner's world I've won,
accept yourself and go with ease

Search for beauty deep, it shows
the answers are inside,
with knowledge you can have the fun,
stopping all those tears you've cried.

This is just meant to brighten your day...you know, to get your mind out of all of those depressing poems Hope you enjoyed it!

© Copyright 2000 Lakewalker - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-13 02:12 PM


Lakewalker~~~That is so sweet of you to write a happy poem for us here!!!Awww your so nice...Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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2 posted 2000-09-13 09:05 PM


Inner peace is hard to obtain, but when you have it, it's one of the few things that no one can take from you. Thank you for "brightening our day", Lake!  
Child of the Stars
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3 posted 2000-09-13 09:32 PM



  Well...it worked....you brightened my day...thanks so much..This poem broght a peace right when I needed it. Would it be okay if I printed this out? Just askin cuz I don't want to break any copyright laws or anything..thanks again..

   ~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

LoveAll
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4 posted 2000-09-13 10:06 PM


Lakewalker~
I love it!  You really did brighten my day.  Inner peace is such an important thing.  Without it, you really can't find much happiness in life.  Wonderful poem!
God Bless  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-09-13 10:38 PM


Thank you all for the replies, I appreciate them so much

And, yes, you can go ahead and print this

Lani_DarkOne
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6 posted 2000-09-14 02:07 PM


"in this winner's world I've won,
accept yourself and go with ease"
Very well said..I enjoyed reading this 'positive poem'..it's great..

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~

Allan Riverwood
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7 posted 2001-03-30 04:08 PM


I've been going through your post history.  Of course my day is already bright.     (aww)
Good job, this was a nice one.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.
~Allan

Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it.  ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale)

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