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jytree
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omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-09-13 11:47 AM


In life or death,
In justice or mercy,
A angel always guides the way.

A way to what though?
To life?
To death?

Do we find mercy?
Or will we be judged?

We all we find out in the end


For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-13 11:49 AM


This is good!!!

How did you get that little dancing baby up there???


~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

jytree
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omaha ark usa
2 posted 2000-09-13 11:57 AM


thank you well when you finish a reply or a poem you look alllllllllllllll the way to the bottom of the screen and look for available images and you can look throught them until you find the one you like then you highlight the jumble before it and hold control press the key "c" and get out of the screen but don't close it come back to your poem click the mouse the bring up the cursor and the hold control and then press "v" and the jumble you highlited should appear at the end of your poem and then just submit it and you have what you wanted.
jytree
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omaha ark usa
3 posted 2000-09-13 01:09 PM


Forgive me for using personal space to post this but it is VERY important my girlfriend's father is trying to break us up I am not worried for myself but her I am.

I sit and wonder I find love but at what price right now a feel so torn apart I love her yet I make war agaist him the old fable between love and war comes to pass again so I say again I can love but at what price

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-09-14 10:22 AM


At whatever price you want Jay...sometimes loves price is too high though..but do you think you can love at that price?

your friend,

~*~SCG~*~

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 09-14-2000).]

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
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5 posted 2000-09-15 09:44 PM


I think this is a great poem and I hope to read more. Keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

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