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luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-13 06:54 AM

SANAI:
That’s you
All that is left
Up there in that jar
Only ashes

And this is me
Unable to take my eyes away
Looking up at you
And all that is left

The hurt that I am feeling
Looking at you intently
Is more that can be expressed
For you are gone

No longer will you be anything more
Than ash up there in that pot
Its all that is left
And I am missing the rest

I open the pot
And it can’t be you
How could my sweet little dog be this
But this is all that is left

I want to sniff it
But no way can I identify you
For you are gone
This is all that is left

And it hurts

Then I start to remember
All it was we had
Memories
They are there

And they will always be there

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* everyone is special, if you look hard enough to find it *

[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 09-13-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-13 10:57 AM

I open the pot
And it can’t be you
How could my sweet little dog be this
But this is all that is left

This is the way I am gonna feel when my dog dies...Shes really sick...I am sorry that your dog died...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-13 04:02 PM

Great job of expressing you emotions, pets can get very close to us. Just keep remembering all the good times

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

3 posted 2000-09-13 06:04 PM

Great job working with words. You kept it flowing. i loved the style. Keep up the good work!

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-13 08:51 PM

GREAT!!!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-09-13 08:57 PM

Oh, I'm so sorry that you lost your dog. Animals are special companions, and it hurts to lose them, for they understand things that humans always seem to miss. I am an animal lover, and this brought me to tears! You have my sympathy.

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