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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-13 02:03 AM


When I look into those glowing eyes of yours
My world seems to stop
As the omnipresent beauty from within appears
You glow like a light in the dark of night
As your splendor radiates from you
You would stop any man in his tracks
With that great beauty of yours
For it did stop me
When I first saw you
I thought to myself
“Do I have a chance”
A sense of doubt when through me
And I brushed the idea away
Knowing that since you are a junior
And me, a freshman
There is probably no chance at all
But, whenever I see you in the hall
Or in the class
I always feel like I have found the one
That I truly love
But the question is
Will you share the feeling
Or will we “Just be friends”
You should know by now that I love you
And that I always will
I have given you signs
Even a child would know
But if you didn’t
I tell you now
In order to get it off my chest
And into your heart

To where you can understand it all
And where you may actually start
Feeling the same way about me
As I do you
For I love you
And always will
Until the day we shall part
And never meet again
But until that day comes
Would you please
Share your love with me
So that I can feel like someone



*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
luvnkris
Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
1 posted 2000-09-13 06:25 AM


awwwwh that is so sweeet!  

man, i wish a guy felt like that about me!!!
hehehe

anyways... it was gr8 i loved it!!

Luv always Jo
xoxoxox


* everyone is special, if you look hard enough to find it *


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-13 10:50 AM


Ender~~~This is so sweet...But there seemed to be a little bit of negativity towards the end...

Would you please
Share your love with me
So that I can feel like someone

You are someone you are a good writer...And you dont need love to feel like you are a person!!!Cause no matter what people will make you feel like you are someone hear cause you write beautifully!!!


~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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