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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-13 02:01 AM


Who you are
To the naked eye
Your looks can be deceiving
But it takes a listener
Someone who cares
Who wants to get to know you
To see you for who you are
Not for what they think you are
Or want you to be
Because when they know you
For who you are
Your looks from the outside don’t matter
For no matter what they say
Beauty comes from the inside
And the outside is just a little package
Waiting to be opened
It takes someone that knows the feeling
Of being ignored
Alone
To understand what you say
What you mean
Finding this person may be hard
It could be months
Or maybe years
But you will find that person
Who will listen to you
And see your true beauty



*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-09-14 08:21 PM


Ender,
Good poem, I have felt that loneliness you talk about and I hope you have not felt it.

There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path....

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2000-09-14 08:30 PM


GREAT poem!
That was beautiful!!
If only everyone felt that way, and wasn't so judgemental about the way people look on the outside, because that is not what matters.
Well anyway I really liked that, thanks for posting! And keep writing!!

Luv,
   ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-09-15 05:51 AM


Beautiful writing Ender. So wisely written ... I applaud your sentiments wholeheartedly, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-15 01:36 PM


Ender~~~This poem is very beautiful!!!Keep it up buddy!!!You are amazing!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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