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Teen Poetry #3

Who are We?( please Read!!!)

UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:52 PM

Who are you?
I am me
so who are we?
but if I were you
And you were me
Would you and I still think
of the same things to be.
but if we were they who
would we be anyway?
Let's just say that they are us
so what is really the fuss
but I really like to be myself
than to be like others with no stealth.

I hope you like the work.

Star

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

1 posted 2000-09-13 02:09 AM

AWSOME POEM! you did a fantasitic job. I look forward to more poems from you. ps. i like your little signature

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

2 posted 2000-09-13 05:48 AM

WOW! yeah I go with Ender, it's awesome!!
"but if we were they, who would we be anyway?"

just WAY cool!! keep it up STAR!!

luvz, Virgin Suïcide...

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2000-09-13 07:59 AM

I like this one. I agree with Ender and Virgin, it's very good. Looking forward to reading more from you soon. Much love, Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-13 11:31 AM

Good job UNC...I like it that you dont write just about love...(thats something I am guilty of...) LOL I cant wait to see more!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

5 posted 2000-09-13 10:01 PM

That was really amazing! What a really good use of pronouns...your History or LA teacher would be proud! lol Have a great day
God Bless

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

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