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Teen Poetry #3

The Road to Love

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:48 PM

The passage to your heart
I had to travel it
Not because I had to
Because my heart told me
That by traveling that path
Going down that road
Would lead me to a beauty
Greater than all other beauty
Incomparable in its own ways
And that this beauty would belong to an individual
An individual that would share their feelings
Provide a helping hand
Show respect obtainable no other way
And reveal a love that is invincible
To great for any evil
Any trouble that could come this way
For there is a bond that comes with this love
A bond that cant be broken
Ignored
In any way
For it is a stronger power than anything
And everything in this world
And you know something
When I took that path
When I traveled that road
I knew that my heart was right
And that what I was doing
The passage I was taking
Was the right one
And that I made the best decision
Ever

*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-13 01:23 AM

Ender~~~This was beautiful (just like all the rest of your poems I read)...This girl makes you feel the way I feel about my boyfriend...Im really glad you posted this one...I wrote a poem almost like this, but it doesnt have a title...Go to my find poems its called Title~Less if you wanna check it out!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

2 posted 2000-09-14 06:34 PM

This is a nice poem and I thought you did a great job.
Lovely_Kris

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