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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:45 PM


You do not seem to always be there
When I am around you
You seem to be in a dreamland
With your Prince Valiant
And not with me
The one you know cares
And when I am not around
I feel like you just are playing
Playing to be my friend
When all you want to do is get my hopes up
But, what if it works
And you do get my hopes up
Will you just drop them
Like a brick from a building
Or will you continue playing
Playing to be my friend
Is this just a game to you
Are you having fun
Or are you seriously being
A great friend of mine
Perhaps I will never know
Unless I get the guts
To be able to ask you
And find out what is true.



*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-13 11:39 AM


Ender~~~Damn how many poems are you gonna post today???Why dont you spread them out and post like 2 a day...That way if you have writers block you can just post poems that you wrote before!!!

And that way your poems wont drop down to the bottom of the list before even getting looked at...Same with the rest of ours...

Think about it!!!
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~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~


[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-13-2000).]

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-09-13 08:19 PM


nice poem buddy, but a little note about the quantity of poems you post a day. 2 or 3 maximum is what is posted up in the rules in big, bold letters just before you come into this main forum of poetry. So yea, but anyway, nice poems.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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