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Teen Poetry #3

Imagination

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:24 PM

I wrote this after a night with one of my guy friends....hope u like it!

Was it my imagination
or
was our embrace a little longer?
Was it my imagination
or
did I see that softness in your eyes?
Was it my imagination
or
did your arm want to stay around me longer?
Was it my imagination
or
do you feel the same completeness?
Was it my imagination
or
do you feel the same way?
Was it my imagination?

Love,
Stacey

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

1 posted 2000-09-12 10:32 PM

I like the way you wrote that poem,it was very good. Keep up the good work. STAR

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-12 10:41 PM

This is so cool, I love it. So romantic

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Was it my imagination
or
did your arm want to stay around me longer?

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-13 01:26 AM

Is it my imagination or are you falling in love with this guy???

This was good...I cant wait to see more...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

4 posted 2000-09-13 02:16 AM

i love the style.....it is so new and different... good job. keep up the great work

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

5 posted 2000-09-13 09:58 PM

Thank you all for replying...it really means a lot to me! Have a great day...
God Bless

Stacey

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

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