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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2000-09-12 02:41 PM


Just a little poem,
to some, words without meaning,
to say thanks for you friendship
for in me believing.

Thanks for Forgiving my mistakes,
understanding who I am.
Thanks for Respecting my decisions,
not forcing me into your plan.

Thanks for the Inspiration
in this life we live.
Thanks for not Expecting
more tan what I can give.

Thanks for Never judging,
just accepting me for who I am.
Thanks for Defending me
when I’m not there to stand my man.

If you look back you will see
these emotions spell friend,
something we will be
till the very end.

Each night I thank God
for my friends like you,
thank you so much,
thanks for being a friend true



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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-12 05:03 PM


Tears~~~This is wonderful!!!What a poem...I really like it, but I noticed one error in the following:

Thanks for not Expecting
more tan what I can give.

Friend is spelled friend...And you put E then I in the poem...I just wanted to point that out for you...

Keep up the good work!!!

LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
2 posted 2000-09-12 10:21 PM


wow....I just love it!  Thank YOU for sharing that today!  Keep smiling
God Bless  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA
3 posted 2000-09-12 10:42 PM


It was really special. I liked it alot thank you for such encouraging words.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Lani_DarkOne
Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
4 posted 2000-09-16 08:07 AM


This is a really sweet..but deep poem TearsOfPearls...thanks for sharing..

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-09-16 08:36 AM


Wonderful TearsOfPearls! What a clever presentation you've woven into these sentimental and endearing thoughts. Really well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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