Drinking and Thinking(it wasn't really for any loved ppl)

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Anorexorcist
New Member

since 2000-09-11

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-09-12 12:02 PM

ok so don't think of this of weird..and if you choose to leave comments really comment instead of short things as if i am freaky...just read it, think about it, and please please please reply! thank you

the veins of serenity bleed over the sky
the cracks in the walls are spreading
there's something dead in the floorboards
yet it speaks to me with a sickely rasp

red, white, and blue are infecting the world
what is up or when is down?
I can't even seem to remember what
fowards and backwards are.
I think i might be loosing my mind..
no wait, i'll be right back, i must look for my imagination.

I just learned something new!!!(imagine that)
it went through my head, and fell through my feet
so show me the way through your heart,
i'm becoming quite hungry for some lust
for you.

HOLD ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
don't blow right through this town
I can teach you the ways of leprecy..
you'll grow up here dead from information,
with a tumor in your mind and a hemorhage
in your t.v.
so just don't blow me off..just don't bleed on me..
hell i don't know,
I've just been drinking and thinking.

[This message has been edited by Anorexorcist (edited 09-12-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-12 12:21 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here as much as I do...Well what can I say about the poem???It was quite intresting...I hope to see more!!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-09-12 04:59 PM

Wow. I'm kind of speechless. I'm not too sure I understand this all that much....but I think I may have some idea. I don't really know what to tell you.....did you show this to the person? Oh yeah, one question....could you explain your pen name(is that one word or two...I can't spell)? Well keep your head up, good poem. Hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2000-09-12 05:55 PM

Hello, and welcome to passions! I’m, uh Deranger…the long arm of insanity here at good ole Passions, and resident Altoid fiend…
Maybe I’ve been sitting too long in room temperature, but I think this is a song. I’m getting a definite “songy” vibe off it…or maybe that’s just the sugar buzz? Anyway, the point is that you style is tight,
Laters,

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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Anorexorcist
New Member

since 2000-09-11

Posts 6

4 posted 2000-09-12 11:49 PM

well that wasn't really for any loved ones Isabel...i was just doing that to see if i would get more responses..guess it didn't work..but thank you all for reading.

Anorexorcist
New Member

since 2000-09-11

Posts 6

5 posted 2000-09-13 06:48 PM

ok so just bumping it up one more time in the hope that i get some more replies...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-09-13 09:09 PM

Well hey now..... you know I like this poem because it's different. I love DIFFERENT. I grow weary of the common poem here. love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love *vomits*..... yea but you know what, I wouldn't even mind a love poem so long as it was a bit...uh....DIFFERENT from the rest. Anyway back to your poem. I like a lot of linez, care to know which? OF COURSE YOU WOULD!!!!

1. i'm becoming quite hungry for some lust
2. I can teach you the ways of leprecy..
3. with a tumor in your mind and a hemorhage
in your t.v.

OK. i just like those kind of linez. They intrigue me with like....HOW you thought of them. Cuz you know, i think of them too!! wahoo! i guess yea, ok so i write poemz too i geuss, check them out if you'd like. adios!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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