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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-11 08:06 PM


Three years ago,
Yesterday,
I stepped into,
A relationship.

I loved him,
And still do,
But then we,
Broke it off.

And then I found,
My way to you,
I look back on it,
He prepared me for you.

If it weren’t for him,
I just wouldn’t know,
If what I feel for you,
Is love or not.


(Thank you so much Ricky!!! I know we've had our problems, but I just wanted to thank you for giving me the advice to hook up with Irvin)< !signature-->

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.




[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA
1 posted 2000-09-11 11:10 PM


Nice Work.Keep it up


What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-12 12:16 PM


Tamma~~~Is the first part of this poem about Ricky???Or is that a friend of yours that hooked you up with your boyfriend???Well Im not to sure about that part...But it was a good piece of work...Keep it up!!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

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