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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-11 08:04 PM


ok, this one has 2 titles cause i couldnt decide between the two...

~*~*~Questions~*~*~

How long will you hold me,
Will we be forever,
Or just a short while?
I keep hearing forever,
Or was that in my dreams?
Not just in love,
But in friendship as well.
Friendship is more important,
Than anything else.
Are you thinking forever,
Or are you going to break my heart?
Do you think of me as just a friend,
Or am I something more to you?
Will you close me close,
Or just be a shoulder,
For me to cry on?
Either way, I know,
It’s too late,
I’ve already fallen for you.


(This is For you Irvin, I LOVE YOU!!!)

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-12 12:11 PM


Tamma~~~Good poem!!!Sounds like you really care about this guy alot!!!And I wish you the best of luck with him...

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
2 posted 2000-09-14 05:30 PM


You always do such a great job. keep up the good work

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
Concepción, Chile
3 posted 2000-09-14 09:52 PM


Hi, I'm Caz, from Chile. I'm new here so I wanted to introduce myself and I hope to fit in this group.
Well, the poems that I've seen are great, especially this one.
Anyway, I would really appreciate if you help me getting started.
Thanks, Caz.

It's been raining since you left me.

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