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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-11 04:29 PM

Ok yes well here's more

Out of Fashion:

Starring at the ceiling all tired and dead.
My significant other wears a party hat on her head.
Here is boredome with not a thing to do.
I ponder she's having fun with a man or two.

Clouds with rain drops fall upon me.
I've got nothing to do, I've got nothing to be.
Yet my significant other prances with joy,
And here I lay without even a toy.

So with nothing to do I come to think
A thought to thought and continue to link.
I think of days with horror of passion,
Rather a day that I'm out of fashion.

As if my love is out of date.
Prayingly this is not my fate,
And if it is here I lie
Asking God to let me die.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2000-09-11 08:45 PM

i loved it man..brilliantly worded..i also enjoyed the other posts today..all great work.

Now night arrives with her purple legions
Retire now to your tents & to your dreams
Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth
I want to be ready. - JM

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

2 posted 2000-09-12 12:23 PM

great poem. i've gotten that feeling before, and I hated it. It's definatly not worth dying for, if that's the worst feeling you get, you can consider yourself a lucky man. I like the way you put it, that your love is out of fashon, cool. Also, change your icon, there are better ones to be found.
By the way, is that tropical storm coming for you? I hope not. If so just try to be prepaired.