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none of your lies (don't want it anymore)
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none of your lies (don't want it anymore) |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
You know what? Just screw you Forget all I don't want nothing anymore none of your lies none of your "trying-to-comfort-me" things none of your words none of your lies Like it could be true Yeah right! Just be like any other Just be the way you want none of your lies just don't want them anymore none of your answers just can't hear them anymore I'm just mad Angrier then ever I stept into it again With my eyes wide open Now I'm closing them again Closing them forever I'm just sick Of all those lies ...Ok, you maybe got it already: I'm like REALLY pissed at the mo...  I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was Good. keep it up!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Did a guy lie to you Virgin??? This was really good...I love one part... You know what? Just screw you That brought the biggest smile to my face...Why???Cause at first your like you know what in a voice sounding like you are being so nice...Then you like just screw you in a voice like haha yeah Im talking to you... ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
ok, who lied to you?!?! I need to kick some ass!! hehehe. sorry just a little defensive of cool people who don't deserve the way they are or were treated. I hope you get past this all!! I'm here if u need!!And yes I can tell you're pretty pissed, but hey, who doesn't get pissed at times...right? Keep your head up dear! e-mail me if need! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~< !signature-->  If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Like this one. Very true. Been there too. HEHE. I like the harshness at parts. g2g. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eey, thanx all... I'm just like really messed up at the mo... everythings just comes at one time, so I really dunno what to do anymore... Big hug and a lot of thanx for your sweet words! love, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
all i can say is wow i totally agree. sometimes people are like "awwww ur beautiful" or other crap like that. i see where ur coming from. love the poem. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Virgin Suicide*~ you rock my world!! this is an awesome poem that a lot of people can relate to! keep it up! ~*Pixie*~ |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
I fell for ya Virgin...If ya ever need a "Guys" point of view about why we are such jerks or what not...Please...feel free... |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
what a good poem. keep your chin up though. Life will move on. trust me....what u described is how i was feeling about a year ago. keep up the good work though *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eya, thnx all!! Well, to please everyone, I'm already getting over all it! actually I'm feeling quite good at the mo!! hehe... something happened and now it's going way much better!! curlygurly: Thank you!! and, most guys are probably like that, but there are a FEW exceptions!! Pixie-Bade03: Glad you like my stuff!! HaVoK: aaw.thnx!! I will keep it in mind!! luvs!! Ender: hey, you know, I once knew a guy named Ender...but thank you and I will!!! luv and hugz to all, Virgin Suïcide I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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