I have no optimism but please read this anyway(even if it might not be good)

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Teen Poetry #3

I have no optimism but please read this anyway(even if it might not be good)

anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

0 posted 2000-09-10 02:03 PM

"This poem has been deleted and the author notified. Apologizing for profanity or utilizing astericks does not make this any more acceptable in this Forum"

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-10-2000).]

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

1 posted 2000-09-10 02:21 PM

Very nice. it reads as if it were rap. I've tried to post a few raps, here, but nobody has noticed.I've got to get this response in before they lock this thread, nice job, keep up the good work.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-10 02:59 PM

hahahaha dude, the poem was good. You know what I liked about it though? I liked the thing you apologized about. I loved the profanity. Its like.......WAKE UP POETRY FORUM!!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha i loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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