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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-10 07:54 PM


Do you ever get that feeling inside?
That gut feeling
That tells you that you are in love
Well, when I talk to you
I get that feeling

You have changed me for the better
You have opened my eyes to the world
I now long for the time I talk to you
Without you, I don't know where I would be
What I would be
I am happier than I could ever be with anyone else

You mean the world to me
You are the perfect girl
The way you talk to me
The way you listen

If I lost you
How would I survive
You have created hope
And filled the emptiness with me

The chances you took with me
You shouldn’t have
But you did
Not because I wanted you to
But because you wanted to
You have done something nobody else has even tried

I love you with all my heart
And I want you to know that
You are uniquely special
And beautiful
You are angelic because of who you are
And you will never lose that special
Unique
Quality that exists within




*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
LiL'Kay
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since 2000-09-09
Posts 21
Canada
1 posted 2000-09-10 08:10 PM


aww thats such a sweet poem!
very well writen and displayed
i loved it!
                           LiL'Kay

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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-09-10 09:48 PM


This poem is written very bluntly. To the point, and straight forward. I loved that about it. Very well written in this style. Keep it up bud!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-11 01:50 AM


WOW you took the words right out of my mouth!!!Well actually I am agreeing with you...This is the same way I feel about my boyfriend...This is so good...You just poured out all of your feelings which is something that is hard for me to do with words and talking...Keep up the good work!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


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