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brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
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0 posted 2000-09-10 07:33 PM

turn back time and calculate
how many times i've made mistakes
too many to think that this could work
over all those times that it hurt
to stand there
as i watch you walk away

how many times was i confused
all alone sitting in my living room
thinking
of how to let you know

till this day this feeling escalates
day by day as i waste
not ever knowing
will i know just what to say
three years it seems i have past
wanting to tell you everyday

how i fell
will you ever know
the night seems darker then it has befor
still i'm waiting by the door
but i know your not there

i let you walk away
my heart beats slower then befor
and the nights seem to never leave
but i know you will say
the sun seems warmer then yesterday

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-09-10 09:42 PM

Yes the poem was nice! I liked it. keep posting.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2000-09-10 11:01 PM

This [poem just rocks my world! it is going into my poetry collection

hope to see more soon
~*Pixie*~

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

3 posted 2000-09-11 01:18 AM

turn back time and calculate
how many times i've made mistakes
too many to think that this could work
over all those times that it hurt

whoa! I loved the poem. I especially the beginning. You should post here more often.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-11 01:47 AM

Good poem!!!This is something that made me think...

turn back time and calculate
how many times i've made mistakes

I wonder if everyone did that just think of how many mistakes there would be in this world...Just imagine...

Cant wait to see more of your work!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

5 posted 2000-09-14 05:33 PM

I love this poem. it works so well with everything

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

6 posted 2000-09-14 11:51 PM

I sooo related to this poem! lol. Seriously, it was perfectly written. Obviously, you are very talented. GGgrrrr I can't think of anything else to say! It was just so good!
Keep it up!
~Kay~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom

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