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Ender
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Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-10 07:06 PM


You are the beat in my heart
You are the strength I feel
The happiness inside
You mean the world

Without you
Where would I be
What would I have done
You have changed my life
Opened my eyes
To new, better things

Everyday is new
Everyday is looked forward to
No time is wasted
I live my life to the fullest
Because of you
And how u have changed me

My life is better than it ever has been
You have touched me in a way nobody else has
You have ventured into the unknown
And have come out victorious
You are special


*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
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Winnipeg, MB, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-10 09:07 PM


Wow, this is a lot like my stlye of writing, I seem to write about the same things, special people inmy life. I know exactly what your talking about like the person opened your eyes and brought you out into the world. Whoever this person is, keep them by your side forever, people like just don't come and go in your life, they  were meant to be there forever. keep up the great work!!!!smiles poe

Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed

Child of the Stars
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2 posted 2000-09-10 09:18 PM



  Hey! I really enjoyed this piece. Sometimes I am one to forget how special people really are, your poem reminded me of the fact that there are good people out there. Thank you for sharing your gift..

  ~carly


Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-09-10 10:09 PM


yes, she is special. I hope things work out perfectly for you!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-11 02:02 AM


WOW Ender!!!This is so good...I know how it feels...

My life is better than it ever has been
You have touched me in a way nobody else has

This is the same way I feel about my boyfriend...At one point I had no one except for him...And at the time we were just friends...Then our friendship blossomed into a relationship...And everyday I thank God that I have him in my life...

I never thought that anyone would be able to help me...I was in a hard point in my life...Then God gave me a reason to look forward to life...He sent me an angel to help with what I was going through...


~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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5 posted 2000-09-11 01:01 PM


This is so good!  It's flowed so well, I love it   Thanks for sharing this special person (and the poem ) with us.
Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
6 posted 2000-09-11 04:22 PM


this was soooo sweet.....if only I had some kind of person like that....but unfortunately...everybody just walks out of my life...just at the time I need them most....

luv, Virgin Suïcide...

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

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