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LiL'Kay
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since 2000-09-09
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0 posted 2000-09-10 04:57 PM


heres a sweet little poem to replace the one that got deleted
hope you injoy  

*`~Destined~`*

Im destined to love
And yet be alone
Im destined to run
And yet still be found
Alone in my room,im destined to hide
But yet my love rows bigger inside
I need somone special with a big heart
To love me and help me right from the start
Im destined to find him
If it takes me awhile
Cause i Know when i found him
It would be worth the while
Forever we'll love
Together we'll be
A kiss from the angel im destined to see


                               LiL'Kay


[This message has been edited by LiL'Kay (edited 09-10-2000).]

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-09-10 09:39 PM


This is beautiful Lil'Kay! Very nicely penned, with lovely and positive sentiments of a love yet to be found. Well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-09-10 10:18 PM


I liked this poem a LOT! keep it up!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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3 posted 2000-09-11 12:32 PM


Awww this is sweet...Its good to hear that you have a positive attitude after a poem got deleted...Keep up the good work!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


LiL'Kay
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since 2000-09-09
Posts 21
Canada
4 posted 2000-09-11 03:10 AM


     im glad you people liked it  
          and best wishes to all!
                   Later

               one and only
                            LiL'Kay

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
5 posted 2000-09-11 01:21 PM


Thats a nice poem girl, I liked it  a lot. Maybe you'll find someone soon.
Maybe he's right here reading your poem right now.

LiL'Kay
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since 2000-09-09
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6 posted 2000-09-12 07:04 PM


There is a possibility there

but who knows!
                  

HaVoK
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since 2000-09-06
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DETROIT, MI
7 posted 2000-09-12 08:50 PM


Be patient my child... The day of love will come to all... For God has pre-chosen the one for you, and the day will come...when the time is right...


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8 posted 2000-10-12 06:02 PM


This is really good. It actually put a smileon my face.  Simple but very sweet.  I'm glad you have that outlook in life.  Awesome poem...keep writing  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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9 posted 2000-10-12 10:06 PM


Awww very cute poem hun! I hope you find that special guy very soon!!
Lakewalker
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10 posted 2000-10-13 03:09 PM


Huh...don't know why I missed this one before. These are very good thoughts, great job on it!  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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