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And I Awaken...
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And I Awaken... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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All alone... I cried, waiting for your touch to save me. In my room I sighed... yearning for your love to thrill me. I await the time to achieve perfection from your love, Can I survive without that? Then came the pressure, deceit; and pain began. I hate you; yet I need you, I can't bear to be on my own. Don't leave me, I want you even when you hurt me. Then it's over... I feel the crushing weight of the world. I worry endlessly, how can I get beyond your eyes? My confusion is overwhelming, and I need what I can't have. My world is closing in on me... can this ever change? Then one day I look around... and it's okay to be without you. I know it's alright to be without your gaze, and your arms to hold me. I see your faults... we were not meant to be, I deserve so much more than you ever gave... And then I Awaken..... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~WOW this is really good!!!You always seem to have a way with the words...The poem doesnt have to rhyme but you make it sound so perfect...I like that!!!Keep up the good work!!!  ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sweetie... I have to say, you're the nicest one around here! I mean everyone here is cool, but you always have something uplifting and positive to tell me... I love that. Thanks for your comments... Jenn |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very well done Jenn! Your title is perfect for the theme you have written about. It is such a release to be able to "awaken" and see someone's faults clearly, knowing that you deserve so much more. Wonderfully written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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